Finished with the story

I've finished the basic short story, being a personal ongoing project after submission, this was written so that I could continue to develop it and gain criticism before I dive into creating a full movie script.

Notes on editing, the backgrounds a too clear and contrast with the character because the film I used was from mini DV so I ended up using a grain effect on the background.
Along with the grain I looked closely at the film footage and noticed that lower quality footage has a an effect where the images seem to all be in 7x7 pixel squares. Realizing this I duplicated the background layers and turned the top layers into a mosaic of matching 7X7 pixel squares and lowered the opacity to blend with its original state.









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